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Torino, June 7th, 2018, 9:22 am ( Reply )

- Sorry that the page updates have been quite late in the day recently. This one took longer due to being a physically longer page.
We're finally back in the present day.
I had worried about the ending of the flashback seeming abrupt compared to the amount of buildup, but I also think Mel's emotional breakdown and its effect on Sydney needed enough context.
The Syd and Mel that appear in one panel toward the end there are most likely from the 1960s! Originally I wanted to have a much larger panel with a whole load of different designs throughout the decades as some kind of indication of the passage of time, but I didn't have enough time to, especially as it would have involved even more new designs. The other periods are something I hope I get an opportunity to revist, though.

I wonder what modern-Mel's up to right about now...

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I am at work right now and it took every ounce of self-control in my possession to not audibly laugh at Bri's face and reaction in that last panel.
This is a very cute page, too. I like being able to see the development of Syd's feelings and to get more of the story from his point of view. The embarrassed-Syd faces are great as well--they convey his emotions excellently. I genuinely feel for him through all of this.

posted by L (Guest) on June 7th, 2018, 9:35 am



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